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Am I rushing the story?

Sun Mar 8, 2009, 10:00 AM
  • Mood: Questionable
  • Listening to: BabylonBombs - Proud
Have I rushed the chapters of Peter and Me? Should I add stuff or is it fine the way things are? I have a bad habbit of skipping detail and someone told me I made things happen a little too fast between Peter and Justin. Anyone agree?

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